Criticism of Heaven (author’s cut)

The final editing is underway for the author’s cut of Criticism of Heaven. It’s a massive fucking manuscript, weighing in at over 100,000 words (more than 200 pages) longer than the one published (which came to 500 pages).

As some know, when the editors of the HM series first got back to me, they said, ‘Roland, can you maybe shave about 100,000 words from the manuscript?’  Yeah sure. I did it while in Bulgaria, but have always wanted to get the original author’s cut published in some way. Hoping to have it ready by February so I can get it to the publisher.

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9 thoughts on “Criticism of Heaven (author’s cut)

  1. congratulations – you can now be awarded, for 100,000 word thesis undoing heaven, a doctorate in Undivinity. Or Dedivinity. Maybe?

  2. To criticism heaven would be to criticize whatever goodness in a human for that goodness is from Jesus making heaven in whoever has goodness, kindness, patience, joy,self control,temperate, suffers long, not given to wrath, meek, not boastful,seeks not their own, but seeks to love all. Hopes, endures, and believes all things, and is a peace maker, merciful wise, and harmless ,and loves his enemies having life in his soul so if the body dies it will be as if he never died. How on earth could anyone criticize that?

      1. All as soon in life as soon as possible in life and not get those doctor named things like Tourette syndrome.www.upcspine.com, read that web page. look up practitioners in your state right now, and keep appointments. Some will get a normalized spine faster than another because each spine is worse or better than someone else.
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  3. All as soon in life as soon as possible in life and not get those doctor named things like Tourette syndrome.www.upcspine.com, read that web page. look up practitioners in your state right now, and keep appointments. Some will get a normalized spine faster than another because each spine is worse or better than someone else.

  4. At least one person – mattchrulew.wordpress.com – finds the artie persona somewhat fassinating. But here’s a tidbit: During the 18th century, the price of admission to the London Tower zoo was three half-pence, or the supply of a cat or dog for feeding to the lions.

    1. I am glad they don’t do that now, but now they alter them,and persecution has always been treating humans like the zoosexual and other sexualities no better than the 1800 century humans did to cats, and dogs.

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